Short Excerpt Progress 4

I refined some details in both sequences: I included some "B-Roll" footage of my grandmother's workspace that felt impactful and included voiceover of just myself speaking at the beginning of the video. I felt that the sequences worked well together, especially with the "movement" sequence in between the two of them. I also thought the voiceover of just myself in the beginning framed the video well, as it made the dream element more explicit. 

At this stage, the sound design needed work; I was having trouble with different clips having different volume levels, and had to go and sort this out manually. I also put a maximum peak limit on all the audio clips, as many of them were peaking (going into the red of the audio bar). I had some other qualms about aspects of the video and so decided to send it to my Cypriot friend for a more objective opinion.